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<p style="text-align: justify;"><img style="width: 808px; height: 61px; float: none;" src="https://info.compassedu.hk/sucai/content/1684219892381/1684219892381.jpg" width="808" height="61" /></p> <p><img style="width: 306px; height: 353px; float: none; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto; display: block;" src="https://info.compassedu.hk/info_imgUrl_php8gyWlL.jpg" width="306" height="353" /></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><a style="color: #1890ff;" href="http://m.frjozvw.cn/adviser_16377_1" target="_blank" rel="noopener">孟晨海</a></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">有一定的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)能力,專(zhuān)業(yè)技能業(yè)水平優(yōu)秀&ldquo;每個(gè)夢(mèng)想都值得點(diǎn)亮&rdquo;,愿成為學(xué)生追夢(mèng)路上的助力人;專(zhuān)注于理工科項(xiàng)目文書(shū)寫(xiě)作,擅長(zhǎng)挖掘素材亮點(diǎn),現(xiàn)已幫助學(xué)生斬獲港大、港科、港中文、新國(guó)立、南洋理工、G5等多個(gè)名校offer,業(yè)務(wù)水平也在不斷提高。</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">在寫(xiě)擇校原因的時(shí)候,大多數(shù)同學(xué)往往會(huì)陷入一種慣性思維的誤區(qū):一定要提及甚至編造一個(gè)在某某專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)的朋友,學(xué)長(zhǎng),親戚等來(lái)加強(qiáng)&ldquo;我&rdquo;與該研究生項(xiàng)目的聯(lián)系。其實(shí)不然,在我看來(lái),<strong>why school的陳述就像是一段對(duì)研究生項(xiàng)目的&ldquo;告白&rdquo;</strong>,因此,該部分正確的打開(kāi)方式應(yīng)該是:&ldquo;我&rdquo;喜歡貴校的項(xiàng)目,不是因?yàn)?amp;ldquo;我&rdquo;的身邊人都說(shuō)好,而是<strong>因?yàn)?amp;ldquo;我&rdquo;看到了貴校項(xiàng)目獨(dú)特的閃光點(diǎn)而深深著迷</strong>。所以說(shuō),與其挖空心思,兜兜轉(zhuǎn)轉(zhuǎn)地從&ldquo;親戚朋友&rdquo;身上尋找&ldquo;我&rdquo;與專(zhuān)業(yè)的&ldquo;緣分&rdquo;,不如<strong>坦率真誠(chéng),大大方方地贊美專(zhuān)業(yè)的&ldquo;優(yōu)秀之處&rdquo;,講述其對(duì)&ldquo;我&rdquo;的吸引力</strong>。</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">今天<strong>#心動(dòng)的文書(shū)#</strong>欄目,給大家分享往期三位學(xué)員的優(yōu)秀案例,與大家探尋如何另辟蹊徑,把擇校原因表達(dá)得更加真誠(chéng)和扎實(shí),呈現(xiàn)出一份高含金量的personal statement。<strong>(下劃線(xiàn)加粗為好詞好句,大家可以收藏積累哦~)</strong></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: center;"><span class="h1" style="color: #1890ff;">敘述&ldquo;親戚朋友&rdquo;的故事vs點(diǎn)明感興趣的專(zhuān)業(yè)課程及其對(duì)&ldquo;我&rdquo;在知識(shí)積累和能力提升上的幫助</span></p> <ul style="text-align: justify;"> <li style="text-align: justify;"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">Before</span></strong></li> </ul> <p style="text-align: justify;">One of my course teachers is an expert in the financial industry, and he introduced The Hong Kong Polytechnic University and several eminent researchers who graduated from this world-renowned university. Influenced by this professor, I desire to pursue in-depth learning in finance and accounting in your postgraduate program.</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <ul style="text-align: justify;"> <li><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">After</span></strong></li> </ul> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>Accredited by </strong></span>the Royal Society of Biology, the Master of Science in Biomedical Sciences offered by the University of Glasgow has always been my ideal choice. Your program aims to equip students with<span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong> state-of-the-art knowledge</strong></span> and <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>cutting-edge techniques</strong></span> in biomedical sciences. <strong>【開(kāi)頭一兩句強(qiáng)調(diào)項(xiàng)目的榮譽(yù)和教學(xué)目標(biāo),并表明&ldquo;我&rdquo;對(duì)該項(xiàng)目的喜愛(ài)與追求】</strong>Your curriculum lists a series of attractive courses. The Molecular Genetics of Disease will enable me to probe into pathogenic mechanisms from the aspects of molecular biology and biogenetics. In learning Animal Models of Diseases, I can develop animal models of human inflammatory and infectious diseases. <strong>【列舉兩門(mén)專(zhuān)業(yè)課程,并陳述&ldquo;我&rdquo;能從中獲得的知識(shí)】</strong>Also, I prefer Detecting Biomarkers for Precision Medicine Applications and Viruses and Cancer, which <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>cater to</strong></span> my learning interest in the precision treatment of cancers and tumors. <strong>【突出課程與個(gè)人研究興趣的契合度】</strong>I am confident that your distinguished program will bring me a qualitative leap in my knowledge and skill.</p> <p style="text-align: center;"><br /><span class="h1" style="color: #1890ff;">敘述&ldquo;親戚朋友&rdquo;的故事vs突出學(xué)院的前沿研究課題/導(dǎo)師的重點(diǎn)研究領(lǐng)域</span></p> <ul style="text-align: justify;"> <li style="text-align: justify;"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">Before</span></strong></li> </ul> <p style="text-align: justify;">One of my course teachers is an expert in the financial industry, and he introduced The Hong Kong Polytechnic University and several eminent researchers who graduated from this world-renowned university. Influenced by this professor, I desire to pursue in-depth learning in finance and accounting in your postgraduate program.</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <ul style="text-align: justify;"> <li style="text-align: justify;"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">After</span></strong></li> </ul> <p style="text-align: justify;">Considering The Hong Kong Polytechnic University as my dream school, I aspire to enter your Master of Science in Accounting and Finance Analytics program, which aims to equip students with <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>interdisciplinary knowledge</strong></span> of accounting and finance and develop their data analytical skills.<strong>【開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山,直接表明&ldquo;我&rdquo;想要申請(qǐng)的決心,并強(qiáng)調(diào)項(xiàng)目特色】</strong> Your well-designed courses will introduce me to the sub-areas of accounting and finance, <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>spanning from</strong></span> risk analysis <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>to</strong></span> company valuation and portfolio management. <strong>【陳述項(xiàng)目課程能夠帶給我的收獲】</strong>Meanwhile, I will <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>seize precious chances to</strong></span> participate in major projects. For example, I <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>gravitate to</strong></span> Dr. Mike Fung&rsquo;s research project: &ldquo;Relative Performance Impacts of Non-Strategic and Strategic Media Coverage: Do Investors Rationally Ignore Possibly Biased Messages from Strategic Media Coverage?&rdquo;. Besides, I<span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong> am intrigued by</strong></span> the research orientations of Dr. Ji Mingming in Financial Analysts, Banking, and Corporate Disclosures.<strong>【突出&ldquo;我&rdquo;感興趣的學(xué)院前沿課題,以及導(dǎo)師研究方向,更鮮明地展示&ldquo;我&rdquo;的研究興趣與動(dòng)機(jī)】</strong> By participating in those major research programs, I look forward to <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>keeping abreast with the latest research dynamics and achievements</strong></span> in the financial and accounting fields, strengthening my professional knowledge foundation, and honing my programming skills, <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>making thorough preparations for</strong></span> my doctoral study.<strong>【陳述參與項(xiàng)目研究對(duì)個(gè)人能力提升和未來(lái)深造的積極影響】</strong></p> <p style="text-align: center;"><br /><span class="h1" style="color: #1890ff;">敘述&ldquo;親戚朋友&rdquo;的故事vs強(qiáng)調(diào)對(duì)于項(xiàng)目資源的關(guān)注</span></p> <ul style="text-align: justify;"> <li style="text-align: justify;"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">Before</span></strong></li> </ul> <p style="text-align: justify;">I got acquainted with a senior proceeding with his postgraduate study at your prestigious university. While chatting with him, I knew that your program excels in both teaching and research, attracting learners from different countries and regions. As I learned more about your postgraduate program, I am eager to enter your program for in-depth learning and research.</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <ul style="text-align: justify;"> <li style="text-align: justify;"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">After</span></strong></li> </ul> <p style="text-align: justify;"><strong>It has always been my dream to</strong> study in the Master of Science in Drug Discovery and Development program at The University of Leeds. Your esteemed program <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>exposes students to</strong></span> a range of fields spanning the pharmaceutical industry, including pharmacology, biochemistry, chemistry, clinical research, and pharmaceutical commercialization. <strong>【強(qiáng)調(diào)該項(xiàng)目廣泛的研究/教學(xué)領(lǐng)域】</strong> Studying in your program, I will be taught by experts from the multidisciplinary Astbury Centre for Structural Molecular Biology. Learning from medicinal chemists, structural molecular biologists, and pharmacologists, I will gain the skills and knowledge to <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>succeed in a multidisciplinary environment. </strong></span><strong>【強(qiáng)調(diào)&ldquo;我&rdquo;對(duì)于學(xué)院師資力量的關(guān)注】<span style="text-decoration: underline;">More notably</span></strong>, closely linking with the pharma industry and the clinical trials unit in the Faculty of Medicine and Health, your school will give me <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>valuable real-world insights into</strong></span> drug discovery and clinical drug development. <strong>【強(qiáng)調(diào)&ldquo;我&rdquo;對(duì)于學(xué)院行業(yè)資源的關(guān)注】</strong>Undoubtedly, your full-fledged postgraduate program, boasting robust educational resources and leading faculty, will not only strengthen my knowledge foundation and professional skills but also expose me to <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>frontier and focused research areas</strong></span> in drug discovery and development, supporting my academic and career development.</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><img style="width: 810px; height: 196px; float: none;" src="https://info.compassedu.hk/sucai/content/1684219968967/1684219968967.jpg" width="808" height="196" /></p>
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