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</span> </span> <span class="card-operate active"> <span class="edit"> &nbsp; </span> <span class="content"> &nbsp; </span> </span> </span></div> <p><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-WZcOdDRxwofBBLxr2epc4bjknmd" style="text-align: left;"><span style="color: #262626;">在全球化的浪潮中,留學(xué)不僅是一種追求學(xué)術(shù)卓越的途徑,更是一段塑造自我、開闊視野的旅程。然而,要踏上這段旅程,優(yōu)秀的留學(xué)文書是至關(guān)重要的門票之一。留學(xué)文書,既是對個人過往的真實寫照,也是對未來理想的誠摯承諾。對于許多留學(xué)生而言,文書便是描繪熱愛和專業(yè)的利器,是向世界展示自身價值和獨特魅力的窗口。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-C271dmTKjoPlDgxR4ZEcsIOZnqh"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <h1 class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-YyEVdEsUToCJP3xfO4Kctybjnjh"><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>申請季回顧</strong></span></h1> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-YyEVdEsUToCJP3xfO4Kctybjnjh"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-L7bDdRUhQoYvPQx5Tr1ckzC5ndU"><span style="color: #262626;">D同學(xué)在2022年10月選擇和我們指南者簽約,在對接他的文書前,我就和規(guī)劃老師以及申請主導(dǎo)師溝通了解了他在科研實習(xí)方面的經(jīng)歷,以及他申請的方向:數(shù)學(xué)和數(shù)據(jù)科學(xué)。前期溝通中,我發(fā)現(xiàn)D同學(xué)對專業(yè)度的要求較高,尤其注重文書整體的邏輯性,于是我主動和他展開了一場&ldquo;頭腦風(fēng)暴&rdquo;,希望能打造了個性化且專業(yè)的文書材料。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-A4MxdRIqGoxbGSxaPvAcq6wWnmd"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-AeNfdm6V6o2rjNxeuuncRAJgntc"><span style="color: #262626;">在2023年7月,我們指南者在上海承辦了香港大學(xué)理學(xué)院/工學(xué)院招生宣講會,D同學(xué)申請的港大專業(yè)也在會中。D同學(xué)善于抓住機(jī)會,與招生官進(jìn)行了提前面對面溝通,獲得了寶貴的申請指導(dǎo)和建議。作為文書老師,我也參與了這次見面會,與招生官交流了簡歷的格式和側(cè)重點,與D同學(xué)也有了除文書外的互動。這次經(jīng)歷增進(jìn)了我與申請主導(dǎo)師和D同學(xué)三方合作的默契,為我們進(jìn)一步打磨文書材料,推進(jìn)申請流程,一刀刀穩(wěn)穩(wěn)切入院校的Offer奠定了基礎(chǔ)。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-AeNfdm6V6o2rjNxeuuncRAJgntc"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-EG8XdxG2eoIGaKxDZ5Sc9ZZHnBZ"><span style="color: #262626;"><strong> </strong></span></div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-AAcldWpQzoyuiwxsCN5ckU7Onqf" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{&quot;items&quot;:[{&quot;uuid&quot;:&quot;1ad2286e-fb6c-4ff5-8f0d-60c94e7c9521&quot;,&quot;height&quot;:492,&quot;width&quot;:2228,&quot;currHeight&quot;:492,&quot;currWidth&quot;:2228,&quot;natrualHeight&quot;:492,&quot;natrualWidth&quot;:2228,&quot;pluginName&quot;:&quot;imageUpload&quot;,&quot;scale&quot;:1,&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FIXwYbMZ7HoMz6rxEPaccarXLnQh%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16&quot;,&quot;file_token&quot;:&quot;IXwYbMZ7HoMz6rxEPaccarXLnQh&quot;,&quot;image_type&quot;:&quot;image/png&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:142950,&quot;comments&quot;:[]}]}"><span style="color: #262626;"><img style="display: block; 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text-align: left;" data-zone-id="0" data-line-index="0" data-line="true"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> </div> <h1 class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BchpdKmUnoit5IxoAKVcudZCnkf"><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>文書解析</strong></span></h1> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BchpdKmUnoit5IxoAKVcudZCnkf"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BNIjdCBhRoppORxMLO7cSosanhc"><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>D同學(xué)總共積累了3段競賽(美賽、全國數(shù)模競賽、全國數(shù)據(jù)分析競賽)、1段科研、若干課程項目和3段相關(guān)實習(xí)經(jīng)歷。結(jié)合帝國理工對文書的要求,我明確了寫作需要遵循的幾點原則:</strong></span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BNIjdCBhRoppORxMLO7cSosanhc"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <h2><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>1、清晰地說明選擇該專業(yè)的原因:</strong></span></h2> <div>&nbsp;</div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">因此我突出了D同學(xué)在全國大學(xué)生數(shù)學(xué)建模競賽中的經(jīng)歷,由此聯(lián)系到其對數(shù)據(jù)科學(xué)和計算機(jī)領(lǐng)域的興趣。</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <h2><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>2、突出個人技能和知識:</strong></span></h2> <div>&nbsp;</div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">除了在文書中強(qiáng)調(diào)了D同學(xué)在統(tǒng)計課程中的優(yōu)異表現(xiàn),我還強(qiáng)調(diào)了其在數(shù)學(xué)建模、編程能力、數(shù)據(jù)處理和實際模擬的經(jīng)驗,以及其在科研項目和競賽中所取得的成就。</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <h2><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>3、展示個人發(fā)展規(guī)劃:</strong></span></h2> <div>&nbsp;</div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">結(jié)合D同學(xué)在數(shù)據(jù)挖掘與分析、編程和算法開發(fā)領(lǐng)域的未來規(guī)劃,我們共同確定了文書中還可以凸顯他對于跨領(lǐng)域軟硬件科學(xué)技術(shù)的興趣,這不僅于他過往的經(jīng)歷匹配,也與專業(yè)的培養(yǎng)目標(biāo)殊途同歸。</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <h2 class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-MGlkdxXJxoM6eixQo9fckW1Knnf"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>4、強(qiáng)調(diào)對學(xué)校的選擇理由:</strong></span></h2> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-MGlkdxXJxoM6eixQo9fckW1Knnf">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-MGlkdxXJxoM6eixQo9fckW1Knnf"><span style="color: #262626;">對大部分學(xué)子來說,IC都是一個夢校,如何進(jìn)一步強(qiáng)調(diào)小D對IC的熱愛,這也是我后續(xù)在優(yōu)化文書時,尤其關(guān)注的點。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-MGlkdxXJxoM6eixQo9fckW1Knnf"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BtXTdp29ToomMZxxslEcOkh5nOg"><span style="color: #262626;"><strong> </strong></span></div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-CTVFd0BigoM6LzxQ0uUcATz0nof" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{&quot;items&quot;:[{&quot;uuid&quot;:&quot;328b9972-83f2-4516-ad43-a139fd3fbeee&quot;,&quot;height&quot;:558,&quot;width&quot;:329,&quot;currHeight&quot;:558,&quot;currWidth&quot;:329,&quot;natrualHeight&quot;:558,&quot;natrualWidth&quot;:329,&quot;pluginName&quot;:&quot;imageUpload&quot;,&quot;scale&quot;:1,&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FOl5kbZfABo7eIGxIbgdcIwA0nwe%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16&quot;,&quot;file_token&quot;:&quot;Ol5kbZfABo7eIGxIbgdcIwA0nwe&quot;,&quot;image_type&quot;:&quot;image/jpeg&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:88486,&quot;comments&quot;:[]}]}"><span style="color: #262626;"><img style="display: block; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;" src="https://info.compassedu.hk/sucai/content/1716860026944/1716860026944.jpg" width="311" height="527" /></span></div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-CTVFd0BigoM6LzxQ0uUcATz0nof" style="color: #666666; font-style: italic; text-align: center; font-size: 14px;" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{&quot;items&quot;:[{&quot;uuid&quot;:&quot;328b9972-83f2-4516-ad43-a139fd3fbeee&quot;,&quot;height&quot;:558,&quot;width&quot;:329,&quot;currHeight&quot;:558,&quot;currWidth&quot;:329,&quot;natrualHeight&quot;:558,&quot;natrualWidth&quot;:329,&quot;pluginName&quot;:&quot;imageUpload&quot;,&quot;scale&quot;:1,&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FOl5kbZfABo7eIGxIbgdcIwA0nwe%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16&quot;,&quot;file_token&quot;:&quot;Ol5kbZfABo7eIGxIbgdcIwA0nwe&quot;,&quot;image_type&quot;:&quot;image/jpeg&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:88486,&quot;comments&quot;:[]}]}"><span style="color: #262626;"><em>與D同學(xué)的聊天截圖</em></span></div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-CTVFd0BigoM6LzxQ0uUcATz0nof" style="text-align: center;" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{&quot;items&quot;:[{&quot;uuid&quot;:&quot;328b9972-83f2-4516-ad43-a139fd3fbeee&quot;,&quot;height&quot;:558,&quot;width&quot;:329,&quot;currHeight&quot;:558,&quot;currWidth&quot;:329,&quot;natrualHeight&quot;:558,&quot;natrualWidth&quot;:329,&quot;pluginName&quot;:&quot;imageUpload&quot;,&quot;scale&quot;:1,&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FOl5kbZfABo7eIGxIbgdcIwA0nwe%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16&quot;,&quot;file_token&quot;:&quot;Ol5kbZfABo7eIGxIbgdcIwA0nwe&quot;,&quot;image_type&quot;:&quot;image/jpeg&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:88486,&quot;comments&quot;:[]}]}"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <h1 class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-VdAidAwBCoAwJ7xeRqLcxRDTn5d"><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>興趣起源</strong></span></h1> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-VdAidAwBCoAwJ7xeRqLcxRDTn5d"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-AeXvdzqesozrxQxwinXc0fohnVh"><span style="color: #262626;">根據(jù)提綱內(nèi)容,我強(qiáng)調(diào)了D同學(xué)如何在全國大學(xué)生數(shù)學(xué)建模競賽使用層次分析建立評估模型,并成功利用Matlab編程得出結(jié)果,為公司提供資源合理配置的建議。這能展現(xiàn)他是如何感受到數(shù)據(jù)科學(xué)的魅力,通過觀察數(shù)據(jù)特征和應(yīng)用合適的方法,以及使用科學(xué)計算結(jié)果表現(xiàn)因素的重要性等知識讓數(shù)據(jù)不再讓人感到茫然和陌生。<strong>此外,我突出了其對行業(yè)思考:數(shù)據(jù)收集和分析在各個領(lǐng)域中的重要性和潛力,引出職業(yè)規(guī)劃。</strong></span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-YxtCdB8j3oO6ZpxtGhncXFl4nMg"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <h1 class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-SqIPdWqZ2oKtf3xWeMRcNGhfnRf"><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>未來規(guī)劃</strong></span></h1> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-SqIPdWqZ2oKtf3xWeMRcNGhfnRf"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-EgBaddKQhoAHQoxhzoZcP9pInf2"><span style="color: #262626;">D同學(xué)的職業(yè)規(guī)劃別具一格,正如DS所強(qiáng)調(diào)的,find applications in all walks of life,我結(jié)合D同學(xué)希望能在數(shù)據(jù)挖掘與分析、編程和算法開發(fā)等領(lǐng)域工作的愿望,從其未來選擇的多元性,展現(xiàn)他不局限于單一領(lǐng)域和自己的舒適圈limiting myself to just one industry or staying within my comfort zone,<strong>在跨領(lǐng)域的軟硬件科學(xué)技術(shù)相互應(yīng)用方面有自己的見解和貢獻(xiàn)。傾向于選擇大企業(yè),并保持開放的學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度。</strong></span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-Mp0FdjgdvoIXuNxNgUOcihK2nnd"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-S7sWdEMWpowN2dxPrlGcONb9n1c" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{&quot;items&quot;:[{&quot;uuid&quot;:&quot;e9e642b8-5d5b-474f-95f0-83a175dbbd18&quot;,&quot;height&quot;:398,&quot;width&quot;:1268,&quot;currHeight&quot;:398,&quot;currWidth&quot;:1268,&quot;natrualHeight&quot;:398,&quot;natrualWidth&quot;:1268,&quot;pluginName&quot;:&quot;imageUpload&quot;,&quot;scale&quot;:1,&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FCva9bEa7Fom1VRxw4s2cpkfmn1d%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16&quot;,&quot;file_token&quot;:&quot;Cva9bEa7Fom1VRxw4s2cpkfmn1d&quot;,&quot;image_type&quot;:&quot;image/png&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:356484,&quot;comments&quot;:[]}]}"><span style="color: #262626;"><img style="display: block; 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